‘Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true minds’ (Edexcel IGCSE English Literature)
Revision Note
Written by: Nadia Ambreen
Reviewed by: Kate Lee
‘Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true minds’
This revision guide to William Shakespeare’s poem ‘Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true minds’ from the Edexcel International GCSE English Anthology (part 3: unit 1, section B) includes:
Overview: a line-by-line breakdown of the poem, including its possible meanings and interpretations
Form, structure and language: an exploration of the techniques and poetic choices that Shakespeare uses
Themes: a summary of the key themes and ideas in the poem
Comparing poems: suggestions for anthology poems to compare ‘Sonnet 116’ to
Overview
To answer an essay question on a poem, you must understand what it is about. The overview section includes:
A summary of the poem
A “translation” of the poem, section-by-section
A commentary of each of these sections, outlining Shakespeare’s intention and message
A summary of the poem ‘Sonnet 116’
‘Sonnet 116’ was written by William Shakespeare and published in 1609. It has become one of the most universally celebrated poems in the English language. The speaker describes true love as a strong and unbreakable commitment between two people.
‘Sonnet 116: Let me not to the marriage of true minds’ analysis
Lines 1–4
“Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.”
Translation
The speaker begins by defining love by what it is not
Shakespeare’s intention
The speaker of the poem declares that he will not “admit” (accept) any defects or “impediments” when discussing “the marriage of true minds”:
The beginning of the sonnet sounds like a vow or a declaration either to himself, to the beloved or more formally to others
The use of the word impediment has echoes of the language a minister would use during a marriage ceremony and the caesura adds a meaningful pause for reflection
The use of the word “marriage” could have two meanings:
It could mean a traditional union between two people
It could also be more metaphorical and refer to two people being dedicated to one another – the word “minds” suggests an intellectual or emotional connection
The speaker distinguishes true love from infatuation or more fickle forms of love:
True love does not bend or change when challenged
The speaker also uses polyptoton with the words “alter” and “alteration” in addition to “remover” and “remove”:
By doing this, Shakespeare suggests a love which bends or alters is not truly love
The first four lines establish the rhyming pattern of the poem as ABAB and generally fall into iambic pentameter, a metre often used in love poetry:
However, the first line of the sonnet includes two stressed syllables at the end of the line
The disruption to the metre, in addition to the tight rhyme scheme, could suggest that love endures despite its challenges or obstacles
Lines 5–8
“O no, it is an ever-fixéd mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth’s unknown, although his height be taken.”
Translation
In this quatrain, the speaker declares that love is strong and does not change in the face of metaphorical obstacles or challenges
Shakespeare’s intention
In the first line, the speaker compares love to an “ever-fixéd mark” which implies something immoveable, unwavering and steadfast
The use of the metaphor “tempests” suggests that life can be turbulent and unpredictable
The use of evocative imagery extends to a lost ship, a “wandering bark”, guided through treacherous waters by love, now presented as a metaphorical guiding “star”:
Historically, stars have been used to help people find their way home, as a guide for travellers
The speaker declares that the true worth of love is not known to everyone, “although his height be taken”:
This suggests that while it is possible to technically measure love, but only those who are truly in love know its worth
Lines 9–12
“Love’s not Time’s fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle’s compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.”
Translation
The speaker suggests that love does not alter with time
Shakespeare’s intention
Shakespeare compares love to “rosy lips and cheeks” and implies that, while beauty may fade with time and age, love will not change
By personifying Love overcoming Time (as a representative of death), Shakespeare suggests that love endures:
Time’s “bending sickle”, a symbol of the Grim Reaper’s scythe, may “come” but love “alters not”, even to the “edge of doom” (the death of the beloved)
The speaker suggests that love “bears it out” and endures the “hours and weeks”
Lines 13–14
“If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.”
Translation
In the final couplet, the speaker declares that if they are wrong, then no one has ever truly loved
Shakespeare’s intention
The hyperbole of this couplet serves to underline the intensity of the speaker’s feelings and can be seen as:
A declaration of the strength and sincerity of their love (to convince their beloved)
A universal statement of the nature of true love
The couplet is written in iambic pentameter:
This might reflect the speaker’s confidence or suggest that it has been carefully crafted to seem sincere and genuine
Form, structure and language
Always consider how Shakespeare presents his ideas and why he has made these choices – in what ways do form, structure and language contribute to the themes and messages in ‘Sonnet 116’?
You will gain more marks if you focus on the poem’s themes than on individual poetic techniques. Therefore, the analysis in the following sections is arranged by theme, and examines the intentions behind the poet’s decisions in the following:
Form
Structure
Language
Examiner Tips and Tricks
Never use subject terminology for the sake of it – your marks will not automatically increase just by naming language techniques.
Instead, you have to write about the techniques that are relevant to the question’s key words. For example, if a question is asking you about the theme of love in ‘Sonnet 116’, you may want to write something like this:
“Shakespeare explores the theme of love in ‘Sonnet 116’ by using a consistent ABAB rhyme scheme which reflects the speaker’s confidence that love can withstand obstacles without changing.”
Form
The poem is a classic sonnet form that Shakespeare popularised (now referred to as a Shakespearean sonnet). The poem is written in iambic pentameter with some lines having a feminine ending (an extra unstressed syllable at the end of the line).
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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True love | ‘Sonnet 116’ is mostly written in iambic pentameter:
| Despite these subtle variations, the overall regularity of the metre mimics, like a heartbeat, the constancy of love |
Change and endurance | The rhyme scheme of the sonnet is ABABCDCDEFEFBB:
| The rhyme is strong and consistent, mirroring the speaker’s belief that love can endure any obstacle and will not change:
|
Structure
The Shakespearean sonnet consists of fourteen lines; the first twelve lines can be divided into three quatrains and the final two lines make a rhyming couplet.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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True love | The poem is structured as a typical Shakespearean sonnet:
| Though Shakespearean sonnets can be written about any topic, they are typically written with the theme of love in mind:
|
Enjambment is used throughout the poem | The use of enjambment mirrors the speaker’s own beliefs on love:
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Language
‘Sonnet 116’ uses a range of language techniques to help the speaker express his thoughts about love.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
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Change and endurance | Shakespeare uses hyperbole throughout the poem to reflect the speaker’s passionate ideas about true love | Hyperbole conveys the speaker’s passion and intensity of feeling:
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True love | Shakespeare also used alliteration to emphasise the qualities of true love | Alliteration strengthens the speaker’s argument in matters of love:
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Themes
Understanding the themes of the poem can help you to write an informed, personal response.
Even though context is not explicitly assessed in the poetry anthology exam question, it is also helpful to be aware of the historical and social context in which Shakespeare was writing to help you to express your own opinions and insights – referred to by examiners as a “sustained, critical understanding” of the text.
To help you do this, we’ll consider the two main themes that Shakespeare explores in 'Sonnet 116':
True love
Change and endurance
True love
It is generally thought that William Shakespeare wrote ‘Sonnet 116’ during the 1590s at a time of peace and prosperity during Elizabeth I’s reign:
During this time, poets and playwrights focused on themes to do with love rather than war or invasion
The sonnet form had risen to popularity in the late 16th century and sonnets were conventionally written from the perspective of male speakers who were passionately in love:
The speakers are often on the edge of madness with love, which is typically unrequited
The sonnet form uses metaphors and hyperbolic language to emphasise the depth of the speaker’s love
‘Sonnet 116’ is similar in context but the speaker in Shakespeare’s poem is not concerned with unrequited love:
Instead, the poem describes love as a binding and everlasting force that does not alter or change over time
While the poem generally takes on traditional sonnet form and themes, love is presented as eternal and beautiful, not a source of pain or suffering
The speaker uses nautical metaphors to describe love’s power to endure, an “ever-fixéd mark/That looks on tempests and is never shaken”:
The use of nautical metaphors was popular during the Renaissance period and this imagery was used in sonnets to describe the speaker’s passion or pain when it came to matters of the heart
The speaker, therefore, is highlighting how love is a guiding force that can help lovers navigate “tempests” in “wandering barks” [ships] to safety
The speaker also uses an astronomic metaphor of a star:
The use of the star metaphor “whose worth’s unknown” links to Greek philosopher Plato’s view that everyone had a kindred star and that the highest type of love is beyond human comprehension
In ‘Sonnet 116’, the star elevates the idea of love by turning it into something that is beyond human reach
While human beings may feel it by taking in its “height”, they cannot fully comprehend its power or worth
The final line of the poem not only reaffirms the speaker’s beliefs but also highlights their unwavering belief in their previous statements:
They do not believe that true love changes or alters over time and declare that, if they are incorrect, no one has ever truly loved
However, their passionate beliefs could stem from naivety and a desire to impress the listener
Change and endurance
One of the speaker’s main arguments is that true love can overcome obstacles and remain unchanged
Love is personified with “rosy lips and cheeks” but Time is destructive, sinister and deathly, pursuing Love with “his bending sickle”, the Grim Reaper’s symbol of mortality:
While death is inevitable, love will endure
Comparing poems
In your exam, you will be required to compare two poems from the anthology. You must have a good knowledge of poetic form, content and meaning to compare the poems effectively.
You need to explore links and connections between texts, which includes the poet’s use of language, form and structure. In ‘Sonnet 116’, Shakespeare’s main ideas are centred around love and its constancy and endurance; therefore, the following comparisons would be a good starting point:
‘Sonnet 116’ and ‘My Last Duchess Ferrara’
‘Sonnet 116’ and ‘Remember’
For each pair of poems, you will find:
Comparison summary
Similarities and differences between the ideas presented in each poem
Evidence and analysis of these similarities and differences
‘Sonnet 116’ and ‘My Last Duchess Ferrara’
Comparison summary:
Both poems deal with the idea of love. In ‘Sonnet 116’, the speaker states that love is eternal, too powerful to fade or change over time. However, in ‘My Last Duchess Ferrara’, love is presented as controlling, dangerous and inconstant.
Differences:
Topic sentence | The love is presented as eternal in ‘Sonnet 116’ but controlling in ‘My Last Duchess Ferrara’. | |
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Evidence and analysis | ‘Sonnet 116’ | ‘My Last Duchess Ferrara’ |
The poem uses alliteration to highlight their belief that true love endures:
| Sibilance is used to emphasise the duke’s sinister disapproval and control of his first wife:
Then all smiles stopped together” | |
The speaker uses universally celebrated metaphors to present love as a guiding light through life:
| The speaker uses a metaphor to describe his late wife:
| |
The speaker personifies Time and also Love:
| Personification is also used in this poem when referring to the duchess’s painting:
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‘Sonnet 116’ and ‘Remember’
Comparison summary:
Shakespeare’s ‘Sonnet 116’, presents love as a force that can endure the passage of time, overcoming all barriers. However, in Christina Rossetti’s poem ‘Remember’, the speaker is dying and fears that her loved one will not remember her after death, despite the depth of her love.
Similarities:
Topic sentence | In both poems, the speakers explore the eternal nature of love. | |
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Evidence and analysis | ‘Sonnet 116’ | ‘Remember’ |
The poem is written in Shakespearean sonnet form, a traditional form for love poetry, and uses iambic pentameter to reflect the constancy of love | ‘Remember’ is a Petrarchan sonnet, another traditional form for a love poem which also makes use of iambic pentameter (possibly to reflect the beating of a heart) | |
References to time demonstrate the eternal nature of Love which is personified: it will not be a “fool” of Time, and will bear the “hours and weeks” to remain constant | Frequent references to time (“day by day”, “a while”) reflect the speaker’s fears that while her love will remain eternal, the beloved will “forget me” | |
The speaker claims that love endures “even to the edge of doom”:
| The speaker uses a metaphor of the “silent land” to refer to the finality of the journey to death:
|
Differences:
Topic sentence | Both poets also explore constancy and the enduring nature of love. | |
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Evidence and analysis | ‘Sonnet 116’ | ‘Remember’ |
The speaker uses a type of repetition called polyptoton to reinforce the idea that love does not “alter” when “alteration finds” or “bends with the remover to remove”:
| The speaker uses repetition in ‘Remember’ such as “day by day” and “remember”:
| |
By breaking from the traditional rhyme scheme of a Shakespearean sonnet, the poet reminds the listener or reader of the enduring nature of love:
| By varying the rhyme scheme, the poet reflects the speaker’s inner turmoil, sadness and acceptance (as if reconciling to the inconstancy of being forgotten):
| |
The speaker in ‘Sonnet 116’ believes that “love is not love/Which alters when it alteration finds”:
| In Rossetti’s poem, the speaker acknowledges that their beloved may “forget me for a while”:
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