‘Piano’ (Edexcel IGCSE English Literature)
Revision Note
Written by: Nadia Ambreen
Reviewed by: Kate Lee
‘Piano’
Below you will find a guide to D.H. Lawrence’s poem titled ‘Piano’ from the Pearson Edexcel International GCSE English Anthology (part 3: unit 1, section B). This guide includes:
Overview: a line-by-line breakdown of the poem, including its possible meanings and interpretations
Form, structure and language: an exploration of the techniques and poetic choices that Lawrence has used
Themes: an exploration of the themes and ideas in the poem
Comparing poems: suggestions on which poems to compare it to
Overview
To answer an essay question on a poem, you must understand what it is about. The overview section includes:
A summary of the poem
A “translation” of the poem, section-by-section
A commentary of each of these sections, outlining Lawrence’s intention and message
A summary of the poem ‘Piano’
D.H. Lawrence published the poem ‘Piano’ in 1913. The speaker of the poem is the poet himself who, upon hearing a woman sing, is transported back to his childhood when he sat under his mother’s piano as she sang. The poet attempts to control his emotions but the memory is too strong and pulls him back. He is overcome and cries for his deceased mother and his lost childhood.
‘Piano’ analysis
Lines 1–4
“Softly, in the dusk, a woman is singing to me;
Taking me back down the vista of years, till I see
A child sitting under the piano, in the boom of the tingling strings
And pressing the small, poised feet of a mother who smiles as she sings.”
Translation
The speaker is reminded of his childhood as he sits and listens to a woman singing
Lawrence’s intentions
The poem begins with the word “softly” and the first line uses sibilance to create a soothing, calming atmosphere
The metaphoric phrase “in the dusk” could suggest that the speaker’s mind is about to shift between the present light into a past memory
The word “vista” suggests that the speaker’s memories are pleasant
In line 2, the writer uses enjambment to reflect the speed with which his childhood memory appears
The phrase “sitting under the piano” creates a sense of comfort and safety as the piano surrounds him
The speaker describes the child “pressing the small, poised feet” of his mother as he listens to her play:
This illustrates the loving relationship the child had with his mother and also reflects how he viewed her
The final line of the stanza uses sibilance to create a soft and gentle tone to reflect the sweetness of the speaker’s memory
The writer has used an indefinite article “a” before the nouns “child” and “mother”:
This creates a sense of detachment and makes the memory more universal rather than personal
It also creates an image of the speaker watching his memory play out in front of him rather than reliving the memory as the child
Lies 5–8
“In spite of myself, the insidious mastery of song
Betrays me back, till the heart of me weeps to belong
To the old Sunday evenings at home, with winter outside
And hymns in the cosy parlour, the tinkling piano our guide.”
Translation
The speaker feels a strong yearning to go back to relive his childhood
Lawrence’s intention
The second stanza begins with the phrase “In spite of myself”, which suggests that the poet is trying to resist the memory:
It could be inferred that the memory is too painful for the speaker
The phrase “insidious mastery” suggests that something cunning and underhand has taken place:
The song, and the singer, have been able to overpower him and control him
The idea of the speaker not wanting to revisit the past is further emphasised through the word “betrays”
The speaker personifies his heart as he states that it “weeps”:
This is a powerful metaphor as it highlights how desperately he wishes to relive his childhood
The heart is symbolic as it is associated with love and so he is attempting to describe the depth of his love and longing
The first line ends with the word “belong”, which could suggest the speaker not only wishes to revisit the past, but wishes to go back and become a part of it:
The enjambment between lines 1 and 2 also separates the speaker’s present feelings and his past memory: his heart “weeps” for those “Sunday evenings”
The speaker contrasts the outside image of “winter” to the “cosy parlour”, which makes the memory more comforting and tender
The use of onomatopoeia with “tinkling” creates a pleasant sound as the piano is his “guide” between the present and the past
The stanza is enjambed as each line carries on to the next, which mirrors the force and strength of the memory that is pulling the speaker in deeply
Lines 9–12
“So now it is vain for the singer to burst into clamour
With the great black piano appassionato. The glamour
Of childish days is upon me, my manhood is cast
Down in the flood of remembrance, I weep like a child for the past.”
Translation
The speaker feels there is no point in the singer singing and playing their instrument anymore as they are overcome by the memory
Lawrence’s intention
The speaker begins with the phrase “So now” to bring the reader back to the present
The word “vain” suggests the poet feels it is pointless for the singer to continue:
The word “clamour” suggests that the music is now loud and confusing rather than soothing
The word “appassionato” is an Italian term that means performing with great emotion and passion
The speaker feels that the present performance is pointless as he has been transported back to his past:
The word “glamour” illustrates how the speaker finds the memory appealing
However, as he has now succumbed to his memories, his “manhood is cast”, which suggests that his adult self has been overpowered by them:
The metaphor “flood of remembrance” creates an image of the speaker’s emotions drowning and overwhelming him
A simile in the final line states he weeps “like a child for the past”, which suggests that he has now succumbed to his past rather than resisting it:
However, although he can cry “like a child”, he will never truly be a child again
Form, structure and language
When you consider how D.H. Lawrence uses form, structure and language, try to link your analysis of these elements to focus on how he presents his ideas and why he has made these choices in ‘Piano’. You will gain more marks if you focus on Lawrence’s themes rather than on individual poetic techniques.
Here are some suggestions for key aspects of the poem you might want to consider:
Form
‘Piano’ is formed of three four-line stanzas or quatrains and each quatrain has 2 rhyming couplets. It can therefore be called a lyric poem as it has a musical quality to it.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
Music and emotion | The poem is arranged in 3 quatrains and each consists of 2 rhyming couplets | This may represent a tune played on a piano:
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Nostalgia and memory | The lines vary in length and rhythm | The irregular meter could reflect the speaker’s struggle to suppress their memory and the wave of emotions |
Structure
The poem makes frequent use of enjambment to reflect the speaker’s memories slowly overwhelming him. The first stanza shows the speaker’s reluctance to give in to his emotions while the final stanza shows him fully succumbing to it.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
Nostalgia and memory | Nearly every line is enjambed (this is when a line of poetry flows into the next line without any punctuation to indicate a pause):
| The enjambment mirrors the way the speaker loses control:
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Caesura is used within lines to slow the poem down:
The second stanza uses caesura in the form of commas:
| It slows the pace down and mirrors the speaker’s reflective tone:
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Language
‘Piano’ uses a range of language and poetic devices to not only reflect the musical nature of the poem but to also highlight the speaker’s feelings of nostalgia as he yearns for his childhood.
Theme | Evidence | Poet’s intention |
Music and emotion | The writer uses alliteration and sibilance throughout:
| Sibilance creates a calm, soothing sound to reflect the speaker’s longing for the past:
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In line 6, the writer uses alliteration: “Betrays me back, till the heart of me weeps to belong” | The letter “b” could mimic the pangs of the speaker’s heart as he expresses his desire to “belong” | |
Nostalgia and memory | ||
There are a number of metaphors that relate to the poet’s memories:
| The word “vista” suggests a wonderful place that he describes his memories and past as being:
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There is a simile in the final line: “I weep like a child for the past” | It highlights how despite crying “like” a child, the speaker cannot go back and become a child again:
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Themes
While knowing the poem is important, you also need to be able to show the examiner that you can write an informed, personal response. Therefore, you need to develop a solid understanding of the theme, main ideas and events depicted.
It is still important to have an awareness of background information that is relevant to the themes in the poem, even though you are not explicitly assessed on context. This can help you develop a sustained, critical understanding of the text.
To help you do this, the section below has been divided into two main themes that Lawrence explores:
Nostalgia and memory
Music and emotion
Nostalgia and memory
D.H. Lawrence wrote ‘Piano’ in 1913 and is known for his modernist approach to poetry:
Modernists did not adhere to strict poetic structures that were historically popular
Instead, they favoured free verse, which was seen as a newer and more experimental artistic form
Modernists also introduced the stream of consciousness writing style in which poets try to capture the speaker’s thoughts and feelings in a way that also conveys their thought processes:
‘Piano’ uses a modernist style as the reader is following the speaker’s thought processes and memories as he experiences them
Lawrence wrote the first version not long after the death of his mother:
Her death had a huge impact on him and so the poem could reflect the poet’s own personal grief
This poem explores the powerful pull of memories, especially childhood memories and the impact they can have on an adult’s life
The speaker yearns to go back and experience those “Sunday evenings” again but realises that he is unable to:
His memories elicit a deep sorrow and longing for something he can no longer experience
The image of the speaker being cocooned under the safety of the “piano” while his mother plays and “smiles” suggests the memory is pleasant and comforting:
The contrast between the “winter outside” (as they are in the safety of the “cosy parlour”) suggests that the speaker felt comfortable and safe as a child
However, the poem uses language to suggest that the speaker feels a painful longing and sense of nostalgia as they yearn to go back:
The use of words such as “insidious” suggests that memories can be painful to relive
They can bring about a deeper pain as the memories remind the speaker that those times have gone
The speaker highlights the powerful strength and impact of nostalgia as the “flood of remembrance” has drowned his “manhood” as he weeps “like a child for the past”
Music and emotion
The piano was a popular instrument during the Victorian and Edwardian era and it was a common instrument in middle- and upper-class households:
Therefore, it could be inferred that Lawrence grew up listening to the piano during his childhood
The poem begins with the speaker listening to a woman singing, which takes him back to his childhood:
The speaker uses the phrase “insidious mastery of song” to suggests that music has the ability and power to rouse emotion and vivid memories:
The word “insidious” suggests that it may even be against the speaker’s wishes
The speaker tries to resist the sudden urge to be taken back “down the vista of years” but, as he listens, the song “betrays” him back:
The word “betrays” suggests that he has been deceived by the music and cheated into revisiting his past
As a result of listening to the music, his heart “weeps” and he cries “like a child” for his past:
This emphasises the transformative power of music and how it has the ability to make one feel even the deepest and most suppressed emotions
The poem highlights how music has the ability to link the past with the present:
The music forces him to remember the “tinkling piano” that serves as his “guide”
At the end, the speaker is overcome with emotion and finally succumbs to his feelings:
This highlights the power that music has to stir and resurface emotions within the listener
Comparing poems
In your exam, you will be required to compare two poems from the anthology so you must have a good knowledge of poetic form, content and meaning to compare the poems effectively.
You must be able to explore links and connections between texts, which includes looking at both poets’ use of language, form and structure.
In ‘Piano’, Lawrence’s main ideas are centred around nostalgia and memories; therefore, the following comparisons would be a good starting point:
‘Piano’ and ‘Half Past Two’
‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’
For each pair of poems, you will find:
Comparison summary
Similarities and differences between the ideas presented in each poem
Evidence and analysis of these similarities and differences
Examiner Tips and Tricks
It is important to note that you will be expected to apply your knowledge of poetic form, content and meaning to compare poems. This means that you need to show an understanding of how writers create literary effects through imagery, language choice, tone and structure.
However, remember that the question will ask you to focus on a particular idea or theme, such as the theme of memory in ‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’. You must therefore be able to reference and quote parts of the text that link to the theme of memory. Keep your responses sustained and focused on the key words in the question to avoid making vague and generalised comments.
‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’
Comparison summary:
Both ‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’ are poems that look back on childhood memories. However, ‘Piano’ is written from the perspective of an adult who is forced to remember his childhood whereas ‘Half-past Two’ begins from the perspective of a speaker who recounts a memory of a child and writes from the child’s point of view. However, it could be suggested that the speaker in ‘Half-past Two’ is the adult version of the child in the poem.
Similarities:
Topic sentence | Both ‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’ look back on childhood memories | |
Evidence and analysis | ‘Piano’ | ‘Half-past Two’ |
‘Piano’ is about an adult who is forced to revisit a pleasant childhood memory after listening to a song | ‘Half-past Two’ is about a young child who has done something naughty at school and his teacher is punishing him | |
Symbolism is used to transport the speaker back to the past:
| The poem uses the clock to symbolise power and knowledge and as a contraption that adults use to organise their day:
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The speaker uses personification:
| The child personifies the “clockface” by describing the “little eyes” and “two long legs”:
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‘Piano’ does not follow a regular meter and its lines vary in length:
| ‘Half-past Two’ does not follow a strict meter in order to reflect the conversational and childlike tone |
Differences:
Topic sentence | Although both poems are about a childhood memory, they both present childhood in different ways | |
Evidence and analysis | ‘Piano’ | ‘Half-past Two’ |
In ‘Piano’, the speaker presents childhood in a positive way as he recounts a fond memory that makes him long for his childhood | In ‘Half-past Two’, the speaker recounts an incident with a child who is given detention by a teacher but he doesn’t know how to tell the time:
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Lawrence uses language that is sophisticated to reflect the age of the speaker and the fact that he is recalling a memory of his childhood:
| However, in ‘Half-past Two’’ the speaker uses language to reflect the child’s innocence and point of view on the incident:
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‘Piano’ has 3 quatrains or four-line stanzas which consists of 2 rhyming couplets per stanza:
| The poem is written in free verse and is made up of 11 three-line stanzas, which are also known as tercets:
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The speaker uses assonance to contribute to the rhythm by creating a musical and lyrical sound throughout:
| The speaker uses hyperbole to describe aspects of the incident from the young child’s perspective:
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‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’
Comparison summary:
‘Piano’ is a poem about a man who is looking back on his childhood, which he finds both painful and irresistible. However, ‘Remember’ by Christina Rossetti is a poem about a woman who is dying. Written from her perspective, she asks her loved one to remember her.
Similarities:
Topic sentence | Both poems explore the themes of nostalgia and memory through loss | |
Evidence and analysis | ‘Piano’ | ‘Remember’ |
The speaker in ‘Piano’ recalls a painful but beautiful memory of himself as a child with his mother, who has since passed | ‘Remember’ is also about memories but is written from the perspective of someone who is dying | |
Alliteration and sibilance is used to create a soothing atmosphere that reflects the speaker’s yearning for the past:
| Alliteration is also used to make the poem feel intimate and loving:
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Assonance is used to contribute to the rhythm and musicality:
| Assonance is also used to link the language and rhythm to the theme of memory and nostalgia:
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The writer uses caesura to slow down the pace in order to focus on key aspects of the speaker’s memory:
| Caesura is also used in ‘Remember’, though it is used less frequently:
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Differences:
Topic sentence | While both poems are about memory and nostalgia, the speaker in ‘Piano’ grieves for his past life whereas the speaker in ‘Remember’ has accepted her fate | |
Evidence and analysis | ‘Piano’ | ‘Remember’ |
The poem is written from the perspective of someone who has lost their mother and finds it painful recounting memories of their childhood | ‘Remember’ is written from the perspective of one who is dying and asks for their loved one to remember them once they have passed away | |
The poem views memories as something painful and must not be allowed to resurface | ‘Remember’ views memories as something to be cherished as it is the only thing that remains after a loved one has passed away | |
The speaker weeps as he recalls his childhood but he understands and accepts that he can no longer relive his childhood:
| The speaker describes what she and her loved one will not be able to do once she has passed away:
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‘Piano’ is a poem that follows the speaker’s stream of consciousness:
| The writer uses an apostrophe as she is addressing her lover:
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‘Piano’ consists of 3 quatrains, which are four-line stanzas:
| The poem is a Petrarchan sonnet:
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