‘Piano’ (Edexcel IGCSE English Literature)

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‘Piano’

Below you will find a guide to D.H. Lawrence’s poem titled ‘Piano’ from the Pearson Edexcel International GCSE English Anthology (part 3: unit 1, section B). This guide includes:

  • Overview: a line-by-line breakdown of the poem, including its possible meanings and interpretations

  • Form, structure and language: an exploration of the techniques and poetic choices that Lawrence has used

  • Themes: an exploration of the themes and ideas in the poem

  • Comparing poems: suggestions on which poems to compare it to

Overview

To answer an essay question on a poem, you must understand what it is about. The overview section includes:

  • A summary of the poem 

  • A “translation” of the poem, section-by-section

  • A commentary of each of these sections, outlining Lawrence’s intention and message

A summary of the poem ‘Piano’

D.H. Lawrence published the poem ‘Piano’ in 1913. The speaker of the poem is the poet himself who, upon hearing a woman sing, is transported back to his childhood when he sat under his mother’s piano as she sang. The poet attempts to control his emotions but the memory is too strong and pulls him back. He is overcome and cries for his deceased mother and his lost childhood.

‘Piano’ analysis

Lines 1–4

“Softly, in the dusk, a woman is singing to me;

Taking me back down the vista of years, till I see

A child sitting under the piano, in the boom of the tingling strings 

And pressing the small, poised feet of a mother who smiles as she sings.”

Translation

  • The speaker is reminded of his childhood as he sits and listens to a woman singing

Lawrence’s intentions

  • The poem begins with the word “softly” and the first line uses sibilance to create a soothing, calming atmosphere

  • The metaphoric phrase “in the dusk” could suggest that the speaker’s mind is about to shift between the present light into a past memory

  • The word “vista” suggests that the speaker’s memories are pleasant 

  • In line 2, the writer uses enjambment to reflect the speed with which his childhood memory appears

  • The phrase “sitting under the piano” creates a sense of comfort and safety as the piano surrounds him 

  • The speaker describes the child “pressing the small, poised feet” of his mother as he listens to her play:

    • This illustrates the loving relationship the child had with his mother and also reflects how he viewed her

  • The final line of the stanza uses sibilance to create a soft and gentle tone to reflect the sweetness of the speaker’s memory

  • The writer has used an indefinite article “a” before the nouns “child” and “mother”:

    • This creates a sense of detachment and makes the memory more universal rather than personal

    • It also creates an image of the speaker watching his memory play out in front of him rather than reliving the memory as the child

Lies 5–8

“In spite of myself, the insidious mastery of song

Betrays me back, till the heart of me weeps to belong

To the old Sunday evenings at home, with winter outside

And hymns in the cosy parlour, the tinkling piano our guide.”

Translation

  • The speaker feels a strong yearning to go back to relive his childhood

Lawrence’s intention

  • The second stanza begins with the phrase “In spite of myself”, which suggests that the poet is trying to resist the memory:

    • It could be inferred that the memory is too painful for the speaker

  • The phrase “insidious mastery” suggests that something cunning and underhand has taken place:

    • The song, and the singer, have been able to overpower him and control him

  • The idea of the speaker not wanting to revisit the past is further emphasised through the word “betrays”

  • The speaker personifies his heart as he states that it “weeps”:

    • This is a powerful metaphor as it highlights how desperately he wishes to relive his childhood

    • The heart is symbolic as it is associated with love and so he is attempting to describe the depth of his love and longing

  • The first line ends with the word “belong”, which could suggest the speaker not only wishes to revisit the past, but wishes to go back and become a part of it:

    • The enjambment between lines 1 and 2 also separates the speaker’s present feelings and his past memory: his heart “weeps” for those “Sunday evenings”

  • The speaker contrasts the outside image of “winter” to the “cosy parlour”, which makes the memory more comforting and tender

  • The use of onomatopoeia with “tinkling” creates a pleasant sound as the piano is his “guide” between the present and the past

  • The stanza is enjambed as each line carries on to the next, which mirrors the force and strength of the memory that is pulling the speaker in deeply

Lines 9–12

“So now it is vain for the singer to burst into clamour

With the great black piano appassionato. The glamour

Of childish days is upon me, my manhood is cast

Down in the flood of remembrance, I weep like a child for the past.”

Translation

  • The speaker feels there is no point in the singer singing and playing their instrument anymore as they are overcome by the memory 

Lawrence’s intention

  • The speaker begins with the phrase “So now” to bring the reader back to the present

  • The word “vain” suggests the poet feels it is pointless for the singer to continue:

    • The word “clamour” suggests that the music is now loud and confusing rather than soothing

  • The word “appassionato” is an Italian term that means performing with great emotion and passion

  • The speaker feels that the present performance is pointless as he has been transported back to his past:

    • The word “glamour” illustrates how the speaker finds the memory appealing

  • However, as he has now succumbed to his memories, his “manhood is cast”, which suggests that his adult self has been overpowered by them:

    • The metaphor “flood of remembrance” creates an image of the speaker’s emotions drowning and overwhelming him

  • A simile in the final line states he weeps “like a child for the past”, which suggests that he has now succumbed to his past rather than resisting it:

    • However, although he can cry “like a child”, he will never truly be a child again

Form, structure and language

When you consider how D.H. Lawrence uses form, structure and language, try to link your analysis of these elements to focus on how he presents his ideas and why he has made these choices in ‘Piano’. You will gain more marks if you focus on Lawrence’s themes rather than on individual poetic techniques. 

Here are some suggestions for key aspects of the poem you might want to consider: 

Form

‘Piano’ is formed of three four-line stanzas or quatrains and each quatrain has 2 rhyming couplets. It can therefore be called a lyric poem as it has a musical quality to it. 

Theme

Evidence

Poet’s intention

Music and emotion

The poem is arranged in 3 quatrains and each consists of 2 rhyming couplets

This may represent a tune played on a piano:

  • It links the idea that a song can bring about strong emotions in a listener

Nostalgia and memory

The lines vary in length and rhythm 

The irregular meter could reflect the speaker’s struggle to suppress their memory and the wave of emotions 

Structure

The poem makes frequent use of enjambment to reflect the speaker’s memories slowly overwhelming him. The first stanza shows the speaker’s reluctance to give in to his emotions while the final stanza shows him fully succumbing to it.

Theme

Evidence

Poet’s intention

Nostalgia and memory

Nearly every line is enjambed (this is when a line of poetry flows into the next line without any punctuation to indicate a pause):

  • For example, in line 6, he ends with “belong” to reflect the speaker’s longing for his past life

The enjambment mirrors the way the speaker loses control: 

  • Enjambment heightens the pace and the speaker’s desire to return to the past 

Caesura is used within lines to slow the poem down:

  • For example, the first line uses caesura: “Softly, in the dusk, a woman is singing to me;”

The second stanza uses caesura in the form of commas:

  • For example: “In spite of myself, the insidious mastery of song”

  • The only full stop caesura is used in the final stanza: “With the great black piano appassionato. The glamour”

It slows the pace down and mirrors the speaker’s reflective tone:

  • In the first line, caesura creates a gentle tone as the speaker allows the music to wash over him

  • In the second stanza it reflects the speaker’s mind: as the stanza progresses, he goes deeper into his memory

  • The full stop highlights the speaker’s disinterest in the music being played as he has now fully succumbed to his memory and is overcome with emotion:

    • The full stop could symbolise silence and the speaker’s detachment

Language

‘Piano’ uses a range of language and poetic devices to not only reflect the musical nature of the poem but to also highlight the speaker’s feelings of nostalgia as he yearns for his childhood.

Theme

Evidence

Poet’s intention

Music and emotion

The writer uses alliteration and sibilance throughout:

  • For example, the first two lines with “softly”, “singing” and “see”


Sibilance creates a calm, soothing sound to reflect the speaker’s longing for the past:

  • The delicate sounds reflect the fragile and delicate nature of the speaker’s memories

In line 6, the writer uses alliteration: “Betrays me back, till the heart of me weeps to belong”

The letter “b” could mimic the pangs of the speaker’s heart as he expresses his desire to “belong”

Nostalgia and memory




There are a number of metaphors that relate to the poet’s memories:

  • For example in line 2: “Taking me back down the vista of years…”

  • The speaker also uses personification to continue his feelings as in line 5, he refers to the song as “insidious” and how his “heart… weeps to belong”



The word “vista” suggests a wonderful place that he describes his memories and past as being:

  • The action of him being taken “back down the vista of years” almost presents his memories as a physical and tangible place that he can enter

  • This could suggest that the speaker’s memories are vivid in his mind

  • Personification reflects the speaker’s heartache over the loss of his childhood and his strong desire to relive those memories

There is a simile in the final line: “I weep like a child for the past”

It highlights how despite crying “like” a child, the speaker cannot go back and become a child again:

  • His memories have made him yearn for his past self, but he will never be able to return

Themes

While knowing the poem is important, you also need to be able to show the examiner that you can write an informed, personal response. Therefore, you need to develop a solid understanding of the theme, main ideas and events depicted.

It is still important to have an awareness of background information that is relevant to the themes in the poem, even though you are not explicitly assessed on context. This can help you develop a sustained, critical understanding of the text. 

To help you do this, the section below has been divided into two main themes that Lawrence explores:

  • Nostalgia and memory

  • Music and emotion

Nostalgia and memory

  • D.H. Lawrence wrote ‘Piano’ in 1913 and is known for his modernist approach to poetry:

    • Modernists did not adhere to strict poetic structures that were historically popular

    • Instead, they favoured free verse, which was seen as a newer and more experimental artistic form

  • Modernists also introduced the stream of consciousness writing style in which poets try to capture the speaker’s thoughts and feelings in a way that also conveys their thought processes:

    • ‘Piano’ uses a modernist style as the reader is following the speaker’s thought processes and memories as he experiences them

  • Lawrence wrote the first version not long after the death of his mother:

    • Her death had a huge impact on him and so the poem could reflect the poet’s own personal grief

  • This poem explores the powerful pull of memories, especially childhood memories and the impact they can have on an adult’s life

  • The speaker yearns to go back and experience those “Sunday evenings” again but realises that he is unable to:

    • His memories elicit a deep sorrow and longing for something he can no longer experience

  • The image of the speaker being cocooned under the safety of the “piano” while his mother plays and “smiles” suggests the memory is pleasant and comforting:

    • The contrast between the “winter outside” (as they are in the safety of the “cosy parlour”) suggests that the speaker felt comfortable and safe as a child

  • However, the poem uses language to suggest that the speaker feels a painful longing and sense of nostalgia as they yearn to go back:

    • The use of words such as “insidious” suggests that memories can be painful to relive

    • They can bring about a deeper pain as the memories remind the speaker that those times have gone

  • The speaker highlights the powerful strength and impact of nostalgia as the “flood of remembrance”  has drowned his “manhood” as he weeps “like a child for the past”

Music and emotion

  • The piano was a popular instrument during the Victorian and Edwardian era and it was a common instrument in middle- and upper-class households:

    • Therefore, it could be inferred that Lawrence grew up listening to the piano during his childhood

  • The poem begins with the speaker listening to a woman singing, which takes him back to his childhood:

    • The speaker uses the phrase “insidious mastery of song” to suggests that music has the ability and power to rouse emotion and vivid memories:

      • The word “insidious” suggests that it may even be against the speaker’s wishes

  • The speaker tries to resist the sudden urge to be taken back “down the vista of years” but, as he listens, the song “betrays” him back:

    • The word “betrays” suggests that he has been deceived by the music and cheated into revisiting his past

  • As a result of listening to the music, his heart “weeps” and he cries “like a child” for his past:

    • This emphasises the transformative power of music and how it has the ability to make one feel even the deepest and most suppressed emotions

  • The poem highlights how music has the ability to link the past with the present:

    • The music forces him to remember the “tinkling piano” that serves as his “guide”

  • At the end, the speaker is overcome with emotion and finally succumbs to his feelings:

    • This highlights the power that music has to stir and resurface emotions within the listener

Comparing poems

In your exam, you will be required to compare two poems from the anthology so you must have a good knowledge of poetic form, content and meaning to compare the poems effectively. 

You must be able to explore links and connections between texts, which includes looking at both poets’ use of language, form and structure. 

In ‘Piano’, Lawrence’s main ideas are centred around nostalgia and memories; therefore, the following comparisons would be a good starting point:

  • ‘Piano’ and ‘Half Past Two’

  • ‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’

For each pair of poems, you will find:

  • Comparison summary

  • Similarities and differences between the ideas presented in each poem

  • Evidence and analysis of these similarities and differences

Examiner Tips and Tricks

It is important to note that you will be expected to apply your knowledge of poetic form, content and meaning to compare poems. This means that you need to show an understanding of how writers create literary effects through imagery, language choice, tone and structure. 

However, remember that the question will ask you to focus on a particular idea or theme, such as the theme of memory in ‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’. You must therefore be able to reference and quote parts of the text that link to the theme of memory. Keep your responses sustained and focused on the key words in the question to avoid making vague and generalised comments.

‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’

Comparison summary:

Both ‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’ are poems that look back on childhood memories. However, ‘Piano’ is written from the perspective of an adult who is forced to remember his childhood whereas ‘Half-past Two’ begins from the perspective of a speaker who recounts a memory of a child and writes from the child’s point of view. However, it could be suggested that the speaker in ‘Half-past Two’ is the adult version of the child in the poem.

Similarities:

Topic sentence

Both ‘Piano’ and ‘Half-past Two’ look back on childhood memories

Evidence and analysis

‘Piano’

‘Half-past Two’

‘Piano’ is about an adult who is forced to revisit a pleasant childhood memory after listening to a song

‘Half-past Two’ is about a young child who has done something naughty at school and his teacher is punishing him

Symbolism is used to transport the speaker back to the past:

  • The speaker mentions he is listening to music at “dusk”, which is the point in the day when light is fading into the darkness of the night 

  • This transition reflects the speaker’s thoughts moving from the present back to the past, which is suppressed in the darkness of his mind

The poem uses the clock to symbolise power and knowledge and as a contraption that adults use to organise their day:

  • The symbol of the clock highlights the child’s innocence and how it is beyond his understanding

  • In the child’s eyes, the clock is the distinguishing feature between childlike innocence and adulthood


The speaker uses personification:

  • For example, the speaker states his “heart… weeps”, which conveys the depth of the speaker’s pain and nostalgia

The child personifies the “clockface” by describing the “little eyes” and “two long legs”:

  • It emphasises the child’s innocence and naivete as he views it as something mysterious and magical

‘Piano’ does not follow a regular meter and its lines vary in length:

  • This reflects the thought processes of someone trying to recall a memory

‘Half-past Two’ does not follow a strict meter in order to reflect the conversational and childlike tone 


Differences:

Topic sentence

Although both poems are about a childhood memory, they both present childhood in different ways

Evidence and analysis

‘Piano’

‘Half-past Two’


In ‘Piano’, the speaker presents childhood in a positive way as he recounts a fond memory that makes him long for his childhood





In ‘Half-past Two’, the speaker recounts an incident with a child who is given detention by a teacher but he doesn’t know how to tell the time:

  • The poem recounts how the child is fearful that he will be forgotten about

Lawrence uses language that is sophisticated to reflect the age of the speaker and the fact that he is recalling a memory of his childhood:

  • He presents the innocence of childhood through vivid and emotive descriptions of the memory

However, in ‘Half-past Two’’ the speaker uses language to reflect the child’s innocence and point of view on the incident:

  • For example, “Gettinguptime” is used to highlight how the child is unable to decipher time and his lack of knowledge due to his age

‘Piano’ has 3 quatrains or four-line stanzas which consists of 2 rhyming couplets per stanza:

  • This adds a musical tone to the poem and could appear to mirror the tune of a piano


The poem is written in free verse and is made up of 11 three-line stanzas, which are also known as tercets:

  • This could reflect the childlike innocence and pace young children often speak in when recounting an incident

The speaker uses assonance to contribute to the rhythm by creating a musical and lyrical sound throughout:

  • For example, in line 3 the speaker describes the “tingling strings” to mirror the music 

The speaker uses hyperbole to describe aspects of the incident from the young child’s perspective: 

  • The poem starts with the speaker stating that the child “did Something Very Wrong”

  • The exaggeration and use of capital letters offers an insight into the child’s fears of being caught and getting into trouble

‘Piano’ and ‘Remember’

Comparison summary:

‘Piano’ is a poem about a man who is looking back on his childhood, which he finds both painful and irresistible. However, ‘Remember’ by Christina Rossetti is a poem about a woman who is dying. Written from her perspective, she asks her loved one to remember her.

Similarities:

Topic sentence

Both poems explore the themes of nostalgia and memory through loss

Evidence and analysis

‘Piano’

‘Remember’

The speaker in ‘Piano’ recalls a painful but beautiful memory of himself as a child with his mother, who has since passed

‘Remember’ is also about memories but is written from the perspective of someone who is dying

Alliteration and sibilance is used to create a soothing atmosphere that reflects the speaker’s yearning for the past: 

  • For example: “...smiles as she sings” conveys the speaker’s longing for the past through the delicate sound created through sibilance

Alliteration is also used to make the poem feel intimate and loving: 

  • For example: “When you can no more hold me by the hand”

  • The repetition of the “h” sound draws together images of connection and affection

Assonance is used to contribute to the rhythm and musicality:

  • For example, “the tingling strings” ties together the musical aspect to the themes of memory








Assonance is also used to link the language and rhythm to the theme of memory and nostalgia:

  • For example, assonance is used on the sound “eh” in the following quote, “Better by far you should forget and smile” 

  • The use of assonance ties together the words “better” and “forget” to emphasise the speaker’s desire for their lover to not feel guilty if they forget about her

The writer uses caesura to slow down the pace in order to focus on key aspects of the speaker’s memory:

  • It illustrates the speaker’s gradual descent deeper into his memory

Caesura is also used in ‘Remember’, though it is used less frequently:

  • The writer uses it to re-emphasise the speaker’s message

  • For example, caesura is used in the following line: “Only remember me; you understand”

  • The caesura used draws emphasis on the first half of the sentence, which could convey the speaker’s desire for their lover to remember them 

Differences:

Topic sentence

While both poems are about memory and nostalgia, the speaker in ‘Piano’ grieves for his past life whereas the speaker in ‘Remember’ has accepted her fate

Evidence and analysis

‘Piano’

‘Remember’

The poem is written from the perspective of someone who has lost their mother and finds it painful recounting memories of their childhood

‘Remember’ is written from the perspective of one who is dying and asks for their loved one to remember them once they have passed away

The poem views memories as something painful and must not be allowed to resurface

‘Remember’ views memories as something to be cherished as it is the only thing that remains after a loved one has passed away

The speaker weeps as he recalls his childhood but he understands and accepts that he can no longer relive his childhood:

  • However, it is still something that is painful for him

  • The use of emotive language reflects the speaker’s nostalgia

The speaker describes what she and her loved one will not be able to do once she has passed away:

  • It highlights the only connection they will have is his memories

  • The language is therefore more measured and calm in this poem in comparison to ‘Piano’

‘Piano’ is a poem that follows the speaker’s stream of consciousness:

  • It focuses on his struggles to suppress his memories and his pain while recounting a happy memory

The writer uses an apostrophe as she is addressing her lover:

  • The speaker focuses on consoling and advising her loved one to prepare him for her death

‘Piano’ consists of 3 quatrains, which are four-line stanzas:

  • The structure shows the speaker gradually delving deeper into his memory and his subsequent grief

The poem is a Petrarchan sonnet:

  • In the first 8 lines (octave), the speaker is asking her loved one to remember her while in the 6 lines (sestet) that follow, the speaker is telling her lover what to do if he forgets her

  • The sestet is evident as the writer uses “yet” at the start of the first line

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Nadia Ambreen

Author: Nadia Ambreen

Expertise: English Content Creator

Nadia is a graduate of The University of Warwick and Birmingham City University. She holds a PGCE in secondary English and Drama and has been a teacher for over 10 years. She has taught English Literature, Language and Drama across key stages 3 to 5. She has also been an examiner for a leading exam board and has experience designing and delivering schemes of work for AQA, Edexcel and Eduqas.

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Kate has over 12 years of teaching experience as a Head of English and as a private tutor. Having also worked at the exam board AQA and in educational publishing, she's been writing educational resources to support learners in their exams throughout her career. She's passionate about helping students achieve their potential by developing their literacy and exam skills.