Question 3 Skills: Extended Response to Reading (Cambridge (CIE) IGCSE English Language)

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Deb Orrock

Written by: Deb Orrock

Reviewed by: Kate Lee

Question 3 Skills: Extended Response to Reading

For this task, you will be asked to produce a piece of writing in a particular format, based on what you have read in Text C. You may be asked to write in one of six possible formats (genres):

  • A letter

  • A report

  • A journal entry

  • A speech

  • An interview

  • An article

There are 25 marks available for this extended response: up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer, and up to 10 marks are available for the quality of your writing. The following guide will cover the main skills you need to demonstrate in order to answer this question successfully.

Selecting and developing details from a text

This task will require you to produce a piece of writing based on the ideas and specific details you find in Text C. However, this does not mean just “re-telling” the text, quoting directly from the passage or repeating the details. You are being assessed on your ability to select relevant information from the text and then develop these details in the style of writing instructed. Importantly, this means that you should use clues and evidence in the text to help you make judgements about characters and situations, and then creatively expand on the details selected.

Your starting point will always be the bullet points in the question. These tell you what to focus on, and what you should highlight on Text C. Let’s look at the following example, about a student tour of the ancient Greek site of Delphi.

Imagine that you are one of the students who visited Delphi. It is the evening of your visit and you have now returned to Athens.

Write a letter to your parents, telling them about your experiences so far.

In your letter you should include the following points:

  • Details of your trip and your feelings about it before you visited Delphi

  • Your thoughts and feelings about the visit to Delphi and about how your teacher reacted to it

  • What you have learnt from your trip so far and why you would (or would not) recommend your parents to make a similar visit

In this example, the task tells you to write from the point of view of a student on the tour, and the first bullet point indicates that you need to find details about the trip and the student’s feelings about it before visiting Delphi.

Let’s find this information in the first part of the passage. The narrator of the passage is the teacher (not the student), so we are going to need to use inference to work out information about the trip and the student’s feelings about it.

Text

Relevant details

I took a look at my students and wondered if we should cancel the day trip to Delphi. We had been touring for seven days non-stop with every morning an early one; the students were visibly exhausted. Today I was tempted to give us all a break. We had already visited many of the ancient sites of Greece and Rome and we still had a week to go. Surely, we could skip Delphi, a site I was only vaguely familiar with, without causing undue harm to the students’ education? I knew they had wished for more time to hang out in the city, and the three-hour drive each way to Delphi and back sounded gruelling.

“Could we just stay here today?” I asked our guide, careful to stay out of earshot of the students.

“Sure.” He frowned. “But I think you should go.”

I didn’t want to disappoint him. “OK, then,” I said, “We’re going.” After all, it seemed unfair to deny the interested ones in the group the trek to Delphi.

“It’ll be fine,” I said, trying to convince myself as well as the students. “You can sleep on the bus.”

  • Touring for seven days non-stop

  • Early mornings

  • Students visibly exhausted

  • Even the teacher was tempted to give everyone a break

  • Already visited many of the ancient sites of Greece and Rome

  • Still had a week to go

  • Not that familiar with Delphi

  • Students wanted more time to hang out in the city

  • Three-hour drive each way to Delphi

  • Teacher didn’t want to disappoint the guide

  • Some of the students wanted to go

  • Teacher thinks a solution is for the students to sleep on the bus

Next, we need to “develop” those relevant details within the scope of the passage, and from the point of view of the “student”.

Details

Development

Touring for seven days non-stop/early mornings/students visibly exhausted

We were completely worn out. The trip so far had consisted of constant travelling with no down time whatsoever, and we hadn’t had a lie in all week. I know this seems hard to believe, but we’ve been up at 6am every morning!

Even the teacher was tempted to give everyone a break

Our teacher could see we were flagging, and we were hoping he would give us a bit of a break

Already visited many of the ancient sites of Greece and Rome/still had a week to go

We’d trekked around ancient monuments, crumbling temples and dusty ruins all week and we still had another week of ancient history to take in. It’s all been very interesting, but there are only so many mosaic floors to see

Not that familiar with Delphi

I wouldn’t mind, but who has even heard of Delphi? It’s hardly one of the more famous sites. I don’t think our education is going to suffer massively if we miss it out

Students wanted more time to hang out in the city/three-hour drive each way to Delphi

The city, however, is amazing! So many excellent shops and little cafes. Most of us wanted a bit of time to go shopping, and I really wanted to get you a lovely handmade tablecloth, as they are really pretty. It’s a three-hour drive each way to Delphi, so that would take away any time we might have had for shopping and sightseeing

Teacher didn’t want to disappoint the guide/some of the students wanted to go/teacher thinks a solution is for the students to sleep on the bus

But there were a couple in our group who really, really wanted to see Delphi, and I got the impression that our teacher didn’t want to disappoint our guide. So his brilliant solution was to sleep on the bus. This site had better be worth the effort!

Each development point takes the relevant details from the passage and uses logical inferences, based on the information in the passage, to expand on the ideas in the student’s “voice”. The idea of a narrative voice will be explored further in the following section.

Language and tone

In order to be successful in this task, you also need to use a register appropriate for the format of writing. This means adapting your tone, language and expression to make it appropriate for its intended context. It is therefore important that you identify the point of view from which you are writing and stick to it throughout your answer (and to be aware that you may not be writing as the original “speaker” in the text). 

This is your narrative voice. You are expected to mirror the attitude of the character in the text in your response,and maintain this voice and style consistently. In the above example, you are writing as a student writing a letter to their parents. In this case, it would be appropriate to be a bit less formal and to use some appropriate colloquialisms.

Your language and tone are how you convey the format you have been asked to write in. There are six possible formats you may be given in the exam:

  • A letter

  • A report

  • A journal entry

  • A speech

  • An interview

  • An article

However, as more marks are available for meeting the reading assessment objectives than the writing ones, it is important not to concern yourself with the layout details of the different styles of writing. It’s a good idea to start a letter with “Dear…” and signing off appropriately, and you should use the bullet points given in the task as “questions” if you have to write an interview, but it is not necessary to use headings, taglines or subheadings for the other formats.

While your choice of register will largely be dictated by the task and the character you are being asked to write as, the following guidelines are always helpful:

Type of writing

Form, language and tone

Letter

  • It’s important to use an appropriate greeting and sign off

  • The level of formality will be dependent on who you are writing to (your intended audience)

  • Write in the first person (“I”, “my”, etc.)

  • There is no need to include an address or date

Report

  • This could be a newspaper report, or a report on an event

  • Generally, the tone will be more formal and detached

  • It will probably be written from a third-person perspective

  • No need to use headings

Journal entry

  • This type of writing will always be personal and based on feeling and experience

  • It will be written in the first person (“I”, “my”, etc.)

  • The language will be more informal

Speech

  • This type of writing may use persuasive techniques

  • It will be written in the first person (“I”, “my”, etc.), but will address the audience directly (“you”)

  • The language of a speech tends to be friendly and relatable

Interview

  • You should use the bullet points in the task as the three interview questions

  • Write your answers to the questions as the character you have been asked to write as

  • The language and tone will be quite personal, based on experience and feeling

Article

  • This format will normally be a magazine article

  • It could be written from a first-person (“I”, “my”, etc.) or a third-person perspective

  • The language and tone will be more formal, suitable for a printed publication

For model answers for each of the above formats, please see the following guides:

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When did it happen?

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How should you format your answer?

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Deb Orrock

Author: Deb Orrock

Expertise: English Content Creator

Deb is a graduate of Lancaster University and The University of Wolverhampton. After some time travelling and a successful career in the travel industry, she re-trained in education, specialising in literacy. She has over 16 years’ experience of working in education, teaching English Literature, English Language, Functional Skills English, ESOL and on Access to HE courses. She has also held curriculum and quality manager roles, and worked with organisations on embedding literacy and numeracy into vocational curriculums. She most recently managed a post-16 English curriculum as well as writing educational content and resources.

Kate Lee

Author: Kate Lee

Expertise: English and Languages Lead

Kate has over 12 years of teaching experience as a Head of English and as a private tutor. Having also worked at the exam board AQA and in educational publishing, she's been writing educational resources to support learners in their exams throughout her career. She's passionate about helping students achieve their potential by developing their literacy and exam skills.