Question 2 Language Task: Model Answer (Cambridge (CIE) IGCSE English Language)
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Written by: Deb Orrock
Reviewed by: Kate Lee
Question 2 Language Task: Model Answer
Question 2 is split into two tasks: a short-answer task and a language analysis task. Both tasks will be based on Text C in your reading insert, and are designed to test your ability to select and interpret what you read appropriately.
The following guide will demonstrate how to answer the language task question from the June 2022 exam paper.
Text C (June 2022)
The following is Text C taken from the June 2022 exam paper. It is about a writer’s experience of supporting her husband’s training to compete in an extreme event, and contains both the explicit and implicit information you will need in order to answer the question.
Question 2(d) model answer
Below is Question 2(d) from the June 2022 exam paper (you can find a breakdown of this question here:
Based on the above question, the following model answer demonstrates an explanation of how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effects. It is an example of a full-mark answer (15/15).
Unannotated model answer
Model answer: The writer uses language in Paragraph 10 to show the writer’s reactions to other people’s views about her husband’s choices. Firstly, the writer describes her answer as a “snarl” to anyone who “dared question” her husband’s choices. To “snarl” is to answer back fiercely, and this is reminiscent of a wild animal’s growl, and the baring of teeth when an animal is challenged or threatened. It is an instinctive reaction that suggests the writer is showing her protective instincts towards her loved ones. This sense of protectiveness continues when the writer reveals that she “enjoyed mercilessly shaming” her husband’s business partner, who hadn’t been supportive. The writer suggests that she took pleasure in making him feel bad about not showing more support, and the use of the adverb “mercilessly” implies she felt no remorse in doing so. Finally, the writer’s feelings of pride towards her husband are suggested with “beam with immeasurable pride”, implying her wide smile, immense pleasure and satisfaction at being part of a family that contains a triathlete. The adjective “immeasurable” suggests these feelings have no end. In Paragraph 12, the writer uses language to show her feelings at the end of the race, sharing in the sense of power and achievement of her husband. She begins by describing watching her husband “emerge god-like from the water”. This is a dramatic and powerful exit, suggesting the strength of a conquering hero. The image of “god-like” implies that her husband has achieved more than a mere “mortal” and that he has been transformed into something superhuman. This imagery continues when she describes watching him “power past us”, which demonstrates that he was still full of strength and energy even at the end of a gruelling race. Furthermore, the metaphor “rocket down the finishing chute” with his “head held high” suggests his incredible speed and energy at the end, as if he was propelled by rocket fuel to a higher state of self-esteem. |
Commentary:
The response starts by focusing on the question, with no unnecessary introduction
Three distinct examples of language are chosen to analyse for each paragraph
The language analysis “zooms in” on particular words to consider why the writer has chosen them
The response is structured logically
The response includes analysis of imagery
The response clearly separates the two paragraphs requiring analysis
Literary terminology is used accurately, appropriately and judiciously
Summary
Remember to read the question carefully and highlight:
The instructions (what you have to do)
The focus of the question (what you have to analyse in the text)
Make sure that you are using the paragraphs indicated in the question
Ensure you highlight three distinct examples of words or phrases to analyse:
Do not highlight whole sentences
Ensure you also include at least one use of imagery per paragraph
When writing your answer, ensure you put the quotation from the text in context:
What is the quote about, or describing?
This helps your answer make sense overall
The full June 2022 exam paper is available here.
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