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The 16 Mark "How Far do you Agree" Question (Edexcel GCSE History): Revision Note

Exam code: 1HI0

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Summary of Question 3 or 4

  • Questions 3 and 4 require you to:

    • Evaluate the statement in the question

    • To use second-order concepts in your answer

  • You need to evaluate the statement given in the question against other reasons

    • Two possible reasons are provided for you in the stimulus box under the question

  • You only need to answer either Question 3 or Question 4

    • Do not answer both questions as you will not have time and will not be awarded more marks

  • Unlike for the 16-mark question in Paper 1, you are not awarded marks for Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar (SPaG)

Amount of marks 

16

The time that you should spend on the question 

5 minutes of planning

20 minutes of writing

  • An example of the type of question you may encounter can be seen below:

Exam paper with two options: 3. Discuss if succession was why Henry VIII wanted to annul his marriage; 4. Evaluate if Cromwell's parliamentary experience led to his rise. Both worth 16 marks.
An example of Question 3 and Question 4 in Paper 2B
  • In previous years, this question has focused on the following topics in Henry VIII and His Ministers:

Year of Exam 

Question Topic 

2018 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Wolsey’s personality and his rise to power

Question 4: Cromwell's changes to government

2019 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Cromwell’s fall from power in 1540

Question 4: Reasons for the dissolution of the monasteries

2020 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Wolsey’s foreign policy and the Treaty of London

Question 4: Reasons for Anne Boleyn's execution

2021 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Did Henry VIII achieve all his aims as a monarch by 1529?

Question 4: Henry VIII’s religious changes and the Pilgrimage of Grace

2022 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Reasons for Wolsey's fall from power

Question 4: Thomas More and opposition to the Reformation in England

2023 (opens in a new tab)

Question 3: Wolsey's reforms and the Eltham Ordinances

Question 4: The importance of Wolsey in Cromwell's rise to power

2024

Question 3: The annulment causing Henry VIII's break from Rome

Question 4: Cromwell’s most significant achievement being improving the government of England

Making judgements in history

  • The 16-mark question relies on your ability to weigh all the evidence and state your opinion

    • Students often find this part the hardest to do 

  • There are some common mistakes students make when making a judgement, they include: 

    • Not giving a clear judgement. Students do this by: 

      • Explaining that all of the reasons are the most important 

      • Failing to decide which factor is the most important 

      • Using language in their answer which is not decisive e.g. “kind of” or “maybe” 

  • Contradicting your judgements

    • Students sometimes haven’t planned their answers properly. They start to write their answer with one judgement and then change their opinion halfway through 

      • In the example question, you may state in the introduction that the main reason why Cromwell came to power was his experience in Parliament. However, in the conclusion, you state that it was his loyalty

    • Doing this means that there is not a sustained judgement and you can not access Level 4 (13–16 marks) 

Good judgements will:

  • Explain the second-order concept outlined in the question in full

    • There is no "right" or "wrong" answer in history

    • If you are unsure of your opinion, pick the side of the argument that you have better or more evidence to support

  • Consider other reasons

    • Even if you fully believe a reason is the most important, you still need to present evidence for other reasons

  • Be sustained throughout your answer 

    • They should be used to structure your answer and help you explain 

    • This is why planning your answer is important

What makes a great conclusion in GCSE History?

  • Conclusions are usually where most of your judgement marks will be awarded

  • Students often rush their conclusions so they are not as developed as they could be

  • All great conclusions have these three elements:

    • Judgement – Start with your opinion. Try to include the words from the question. Consider including referring to the second-order concept mentioned in the question

    • Counter – Give an example from the other side of the argument to show your awareness of this

    • Support – Explain why, after considering all the evidence, you have reached your judgement. Use your best piece of evidence to show your opinion

How to answer a "How far do you agree" question

  • In the exam, you will be given the option of two questions to answer

    • You only need to answer one question

      • You will not receive more marks for writing both questions

    • You should put an "X" in the box next to the question you have chosen to answer

Form with instructions to mark a question choice. "Question 3" and "Question 4" are options, with boxes for marking; "Question 4" is marked.
An example of how to show which option you will be answering in the Henry VIII and His Ministers exam
  • The "How far do you agree" question will present you with a statement which you have to create a sustained judgement around

    • For example, Question 4 is:

      • 'Cromwell's experience in Parliament was the main reason for his rise to power.'

  • Underneath both Questions 3 and 4, you will have a stimulus box with two key knowledge suggestions

    • If you only use these suggestions in your answer, you are limited to a maximum of 13 marks

    • You can choose not to use any of the suggestions, but you can still achieve full marks

  • To answer this question successfully you should

    • Read the answer carefully and multiple times (if you have the time)

    • Annotate the question to find the key demands of the question

    • Plan your answer

      • In your plan include what key knowledge you wish to use and an outline of your argument

      • This will help you to create a sustained judgement

A revision graphic for a 16-mark GCSE History question:
‘Cromwell’s experience in Parliament was the main reason for his rise to power.’ How far do you agree?

The layout uses a spider diagram and a structured PEEL format to plan the answer. The points are grouped by colour and category.

Question box (red background):
Students are instructed to use the following in their answer:

Cromwell’s loyalty

The Act in Restraint of Appeals
They must also use their own knowledge.

Spider diagram section:

Green points (Peel 1 – Parliament experience, not main reason):

Cromwell was a member of Wolsey’s council and an MP for Taunton in 1519

Helped pass reforms including the Act in Restraint of Appeals

Showed potential as first minister, but many others also had these skills

Purple points (Peel 2 – Loyalty was main reason):

Cromwell remained loyal to Wolsey in Parliament and before the king

Henry VIII was impressed by this and promoted him to first minister

Orange points (Peel 3 – Personality not main reason):

Cromwell was charming, witty, and ruthless

Liked at Court, gained many supporters including the King

Traits helped him gain power as someone the king could trust with controversial tasks

Summary boxes:

Introduction (blue):

“I disagree with the statement”

“The main reason was Cromwell’s display of loyalty”

PEELs Recap (orange, purple, green):

PEEL 1: Parliament experience – not the main reason

PEEL 2: Loyalty – main reason

PEEL 3: Personality – not the main reason

Conclusion (blue):

“Overall, I disagree with the statement”

Loyalty to Wolsey impressed Henry VIII more than parliamentary experience, which many ministers also had
An illustration of how to plan a 16-mark question for Henry VIII and his Ministers using a spider diagram
A revision table titled "Planning a question using a table" for the GCSE History 16-mark question:
‘Cromwell’s experience in Parliament was the main reason for his rise to power.’

The table is divided into sections:

Header row (pink):
States the topic of the table.

Introduction (top row, black background, faded text):

"I disagree with the statement."

"The main reason was Cromwell’s display of loyalty."

PEEL 1 (left label: "Peel 1", right content cell):
Main point: Cromwell’s experience in Parliament was not the main reason.
Supporting details:

Cromwell was a member of Wolsey’s council in 1519 and MP for Taunton in 1519.

He helped pass reforms such as the Act in Restraint of Appeals after 1530.

He showed effectiveness as a minister, but others also had similar skills.

PEEL 2 (middle row, blacked out with blue lightning bolt graphic):
[This section is obscured, presumably refers to Cromwell’s loyalty.]

PEEL 3 (left label: "Peel 3", right content cell):
Main point: Cromwell’s personality was not the main reason.
Supporting details:

He was charming, witty, and ruthless.

Well liked in court and gained many supporters, including the King.

These traits made him trustworthy for the King in controversial matters.

Conclusion (bottom row, black background, faded text):

“Overall, I disagree with the statement.”
An illustration of how to plan a 16-mark question for Henry VIII and his Ministers using a table

"How far do you agree" question structure

  • Your answer should consist of:

    • A logical structure e.g. PEEL paragraphs

    • Specific and relevant knowledge

    • A range of knowledge

    • An explanation of the second-order concept outlined in the question

    • A clear and sustained judgement throughout the answer

    • A conclusion

  • If you want to include an introduction you can, but it is not necessary 

  • Your answers could be written in PEEL paragraphs: 

    • P - Make a point about the question

      • This should include your judgement 

    • E - Use evidence that supports the point that you have made (K)

      • Evidence needs to be relevant and specific to the question

    • E - Explain why this evidence supports your point

      • Your explanation should be focused on the second-order concept outlined in the question (SOC)

    • L - Link your explanation back to the question to help sustain your argument and show your understanding of the question

  • The question is out of 16 marks:

    • 6 marks for a wide range of specific knowledge of the period and the topic stated in the question (K)

    • 10 marks for the analysis of the key second-order concepts of cause and consequence, similarities and differences and importance (SOC)

Worked example of a "How far do you agree" question

Worked Example

4 'Cromwell's experience in Parliament was the main reason for his rise to power.'

How far do you agree? Explain your answer.

(16)

You may use the following in your answer:

• Cromwell's loyalty

• the Act in Restraint of Appeals

You must also use information of your own.

Answer:

I disagree with the statement that Cromwell's experience in Parliament was the main reason for his rise to power (SOC). Although it was an important factor, it was not the main one as his loyalty was the main reason.

Cromwell became the king's chief minister in 1534 due to his experience in Parliament. Cromwell was a member of Wolsey's council in 1519 and an MP for Taunton in 1519. In 1531, he became a member of the Privy Council. After 1530, Cromwell was also heavily involved in Parliament and was important in the passing of many significant reforms which were important to Henry VIII. These reforms included the Act in Restraint of Appeals which gave Henry VIII the power to grant annulments and became the head of the Church of England (K). Cromwell's experience in Parliament helped him to rise to power because Cromwell showed how effective and quickly he was at carrying out the instructions and wishes of the king (SOC).

The main reason why Cromwell rose to power was due to his display of loyalty. During Wolsey's time as the king's chief minister and during his fall from power, Cromwell continued to show his loyalty to him. In Parliament and even with audiences with the king, Cromwell remained loyal to Wolsey (K). Therefore, this was the main reason for Cromwell's rise to power because this impressed Henry. Henry wanted to promote Cromwell to the king's chief minister if he would be as loyal to Henry, as he was to Wolsey (SOC). This was the main reason because there were many other ministers who had similar experiences in Parliament to Cromwell but were not chosen (SOC).

Another reason why Cromwell rose to power was due to his personality. Cromwell was well-liked in the Royal Court as he was charming, witty and ruthless. This resulted in his rise to power because he gained many supporters in the Royal Court, including the King. In addition, his ruthlessness meant that the king could rely on Cromwell to undertake controversial and immoral acts (K). This allowed him to rise to power because this characteristic of his personality prevented his consideration as the first minister from being challenged as other ministers did not have this ability (SOC).

Overall, the main reason why Cromwell rose to power was not because of his experience in Parliament but was due to his loyalty. Although his experience in Parliament helped him to rise to power, it shows how effective he was as a minister (K). His loyalty to Wolsey won the king's approval because his level of loyalty impressed him so much (SOC).

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