The 16 Mark "How Far do you Agree" Question: The First World War (Q4) (AQA GCSE History)
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Written by: Natasha Smith
Reviewed by: Bridgette Barrett
Summary of Question Four
Question Four requires you to evaluate the statement in the question
You need to evaluate the importance of the statement given in the question against other reasons
These other reasons will not be mentioned in the question
The question can be based on cause, consequence, change and/or continuity
Amount of marks | 16 + 4 SPaG |
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The time that you should spend on the question | No more than 25 minutes Spend 5 minutes planning Spend 20 minutes writing |
An example of the type of question you may encounter can be seen below:
In previous years, this question has focused on the following topics:
Year of Exam | Question Topic |
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2018 | How the Schlieffen Plan caused stalemate on the Western Front |
2019 | |
2020 | How the arrival of the USA resulted in the defeat of Germany in the First World War |
2021 | |
2022 | How the leadership of Generals was the main reason for the stalemate on the Western Front |
Sample 1 | How the war at sea was the main reason for Germany’s defeat in the First World War |
Sample 2 | How the actions of Austria-Hungary were the main reason for the start of the First World War |
Making judgements in History
The 16-mark question relies on your ability to weigh all the evidence and state your opinion
Students often find this part the hardest to do
There are some common mistakes students make when making a judgement, they include:
Not giving a clear judgement. Students do this by:
Explaining that all of the reasons are the most important
Failing to decide which factor is the most important
Using language in their answer which is not decisive e.g. “kind of” or “maybe”
Contradicting your judgements
Students sometimes haven’t planned their answers properly. They start to write their answer with one judgement and then change their opinion halfway through
Doing this means that there is not a sustained judgement and you can not access Level 4 (10- 12 marks)
Good judgements will:
Explain which reason is the most important
There is no "right" or "wrong" answer in history
If you are unsure of your opinion, pick the side of the argument that you have better or more evidence to support
Consider other reasons
Even if you fully believe a reason is the most important, you still need to present evidence for other reasons
Be sustained throughout your answer
They should be used to structure your answer and help you explain
This is why planning your answer is important
Try to explore the relationships between causes/ changes/ factors/ consequences that you have presented in your argument
This will help you to evaluate your argument
For the example question, when evaluating the causes of the First World War, one could argue that the alliance system was the main cause of the First World War. In your answer, you could highlight the relationship between the alliance system and other causes of the war such as the Moroccan and the Bosnian Crisis
What Makes a Great Conclusion in GCSE History?
Conclusions are usually where most of your judgement marks will be awarded
Students often rush their conclusions so they are not as developed as they could be
All great conclusions have these three elements:
Judgement – Start with your opinion. Try to include the words from the question. Consider second-order concepts like short- and long-term consequences, change and continuity and significance
Counter – Give an example from the other side of the argument to show your awareness of this
Support – Explain why, after considering all the evidence, you have reached your judgement. Use your best piece of evidence to show your opinion
How to get SPaG Marks
In Paper 1B, students have access to an additional four marks for answering Question 4
This is awarded for SPaG (Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar)
SPaG marks are allocated in the following categories:
SPaG mark | Reason for this mark |
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0 |
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1 |
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2-3 |
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4 |
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You can boost your SPaG marks by:
Ensuring key terms mentioned in the question are spelt correctly in your answer
Making sure that you use paragraphs in your answer
Allowing yourself an appropriate amount of time to re-read your answer to check for mistakes
Reading the answer in your head as if you were speaking it. Where you would take a breath, make sure there is a comma or full stop
How to Answer a “How Far do you Agree” question
The "How far do you agree" question will present you with a statement which you have to create a substantiated judgement around
For the example question, this is:
"'The main cause of the First World War was the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand.' How far do you agree with this statement?"
To answer this question successfully you should
Read the answer carefully and multiple times (if you have the time)
Annotate the question to find the key demands of the question
Plan your answer
In your plan include what key knowledge you wish to use and an outline of your argument
This will help you to create a sustained judgement
To achieve Levels 3 and 4 (9-16 marks) you must discuss the stated reason in the question
If the question was on the Ludendorff’s Spring Offensive you must discuss this event in one of your paragraphs
"How Far do you Agree" Question structure
Your answer should consist of:
Specific knowledge
Relevant evidence
Substantiated judgement
A conclusion
If you want to include an introduction you can, but it is not necessary
Your answers could be written in PEEL paragraphs:
P - Make a point about the question
This should include your judgement
E - Use evidence that supports the point that you have made
Evidence needs to be relevant and specific
E - Explain why this evidence supports your point
L - Link your explanation back to the question by stating how it or is not the most important reason
To achieve Level 4 (13-16 marks), you should aim to write three paragraphs and a conclusion
Worked Example of a “How Far do you Agree” Question
Worked Example
'The main cause of the First World War was the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand'.
How far do you agree with this statement?
[16 marks + 4 SPaG]
Answer:
The assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand was an important reason for the cause of the First World War, but it was not the main cause. The assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand happened on 28th June 1914. Serbian nationalists, The Black Hand Gang, assassinated the Archduke. The assassination resulted in the Austrian-Hungarian government declaring war on Serbia after Serbia did not accept all ten points from the Ten-Point Ultimatum. This caused World War One because the declaration of war by Austria-Hungary on July 28th 1914 resulted in the alliances being triggered. Therefore, the main cause of the First World War was not the assassination but the alliance system, If the alliance systems were not in place, this would have been a war between the two nations, not a world war.
The main cause of the First World War was the European alliance system. The main powers in Europe before World War One established two alliance systems; the Triple Entente and the Triple Alliance. Throughout the late 19th and early 20th centuries, these two alliance systems created tension within Europe by creating secret military alliances and preparations for war. When the assassination of the Archduke happened in 1914, this triggered the alliance systems. Russia declared war on Austria- Hungary which resulted in Germany enacting theirs. In addition, the Treaty of London also contributed towards the First World War, resulting in Britain becoming involved in the conflict due to the terms of the alliance created in 1839. Therefore, the alliance system was the main cause of the First World War causing the major European nations to declare war.
Another reason why the First World War happened was due to naval race. Germany wished to compete with the British Navy and started to increase their navy and build their versions of the Dreadnought. Due to the Two Power Standard, Britain responded by increasing their naval power. This caused the First World War as it increased tensions within Europe and encouraged other European nations to increase their military because they questioned and feared why Germany was increasing their naval capacity. This was not the main cause although it increased tensions in Europe Britain did not feel the need to come out of Splendid Isolationism solely based upon this reason.
Overall, the main cause of the First World War was not the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand but was due to the alliance system. Many of the alliances made within Europe before the assassination were based on a military alliance to protect countries from invasion from foreign powers, such as the Dual Alliance. Therefore, when Austria-Hungary declared war on Serbia it was the alliance system which provoked war, not the assassination itself.
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