The 8 Mark "Write an Account" Question: Elizabethan England (Q3) (AQA GCSE History)
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Written by: Natasha Smith
Reviewed by: Bridgette Barrett
Summary of Question Three
Question Three requires you to explain one of the following about the given event, issue or development shown in the question
Sequence
Connections
The causes and consequences
You also need to analyse how the event, development or issue impacted a wider development in the course
Amount of marks | 8 |
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The time that you should spend on the question | No more than 10 minutes |
An example of the type of question you may encounter can be seen below:
In previous years, this question has focused on the following topics in Elizabethan history:
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Sample 1 | The Northern Rebellion |
Sample 2 | The challenge of Puritanism |
How to Explain Sequencing and Connections in GCSE History
Sequencing
A sequence in history refers to a set of events, issues or developments that followed each other in a particular order
For the example question, the creation of the Separatists came before the creation of a new treason law in 1593
A sequence of events could:
Happen over a short or long period of time
Stretch over multiple events
Have negative and positive impacts
When explaining sequencing you need to be careful not to write a story
You could write PEE paragraphs to help prevent you from doing this
Connections
A connection in history refers to the links between events or issues
For the example question, Edmund Grindal and John Whitgift are linked as they were both Archbishop of Canterbury
Connections allow historians to:
Demonstrate their understanding of events, issues and development within a historical period
Compare historical events
Explain the causes and consequences of an event
Explain the wider developments of a period
Connections can be written at any point in your answer
Planning your answer will make it easier to make connections
How to Explain Cause & Consequence
Cause and consequence is a second-order concept
Causes and consequences are like falling dominos
The causes are what push the dominos over
For the example question, a cause of the challenge of Puritanism was the rejection Whitgift’s ideas about religion
The consequences are the other dominos that fall
For the example question. a consequence of the challenge of Puritanism was forcing the clergy to swear loyalty to Elizabeth’s bishops and the Elizabethan prayer book
Cause and consequence can be directly linked and can be used to help explain the relationship between events, issues or developments
Cause
A cause in history is usually something that resulted in an event or issue to happen
For example, a cause of the Spanish Armada was the execution of Mary Queen of Scots
There can be multiple causes of a single event
Some can be short-term and long-term
A cause does not always have to be something which happened before the event or issue happened
For example, Elizabeth's choice not to marry was due to her desire to maintain power and control over England, which she could not do if she married
Consequence
A consequence in history is something which has happened in response to the cause
Consequences can be
Different for different groups of people
E.g. the consequences of the Poor Law were different for different people in England
Short and long-term
Both positive and negative
When explaining cause and consequences you may want to use causation connectives such as:
Due to
As a result
Consequently
For the British depth study, you may want to revise key events by organising them into cause and consequence, as it will help you to answer this question
"Write an Account" Question Structure
Your answer should consist of:
Specific and relevant knowledge
A demonstration of the cause and consequence of the event or issue
An explanation of how the event or issue mentioned in the question impacted the wider development of the topic
Your answers could be written in PEE paragraphs:
P- Make a point about the question
E- Include knowledge to support the point you have made
Focused on the group or development mentioned in the question
Show knowledge to help demonstrate sequencing, connections, cause and/or consequence
E- Explain the question
Focus on the key demands of the questions
Include a complex explanation showing your understanding of sequencing, connections, cause and/or consequence
To achieve full marks, you need to repeat this twice
It is tempting in this question to write your answer like a story, do not do this
The question is asking you to explain the sequence, connections, cause and/or consequence of the event, issue or development, not a story
Worked Example of a “Write an Account” Question
Worked Example
Write an account of how Elizabeth dealt with the challenge of Puritanism.
[8 marks]
Answer:
Elizabeth dealt with the challenge of Puritanism by making arrests. Elizabeth arrested the Archbishop of Canterbury, Edmund Grindal, and replaced him with John Whitgift. Grindal was a threat to Elizabeth because he refused to close down prophesying meetings. Elizabeth wanted him to shut these down because people criticised the Elizabethan church at these meetings. Therefore, Elizabeth replaced him with Whitgift and forced the clergy to swear loyalty to Elizabeth’s bishops and the Elizabethan prayer book. This stopped Puritans from spreading their ideas through their pamphlets, which helped Elizabeth. Puritans criticised the Elizabethan Settlement because it allowed too many Catholic ideas like bishops to survive.
Another way Elizabeth dealt with the threat of Puritans was through violence. Some Puritans rejected Whitgift’s ideas and formed a new group called the Separatists, who wanted to be separate from the Anglican church. The government responded by passing a law in 1593 which allowed the Elizabethan government to execute anybody suspected of being a recusant or a separatist. Barrow and Greenwood were both hanged in 1593 for their writings. This forced all Separatists to accept the Middle Way or go to another country. This helped to end the challenge of Puritanism in Elizabethan England for the rest of her reign and reduced criticisms of Elizabeth.
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