The 8 Mark "Write an Account" Question: Elizabethan England (Q3) (AQA GCSE History)

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Summary of Question Three

  • Question Three requires you to explain one of the following about the given event, issue or development shown in the question

    • Sequence 

    • Connections 

    • The causes and consequences 

  • You also need to analyse how the event, development or issue impacted a wider development in the course

Amount of marks 

8

The time that you should spend on the question 

No more than 10 minutes

  • An example of the type of question you may encounter can be seen below:

Question Three for Elizabethan England, c1568-1603
An example of Question Three in Paper 2B
  • In previous years, this question has focused on the following topics in Elizabethan history:

Year

Question Topic 

2018

Voyages of discovery 

2019

Poverty in the Elizabethan period 

2020

Theatre in the Elizabethan period

2021

Elizabeth I being a female ruler 

2022

The Spanish Armada was defeated

Sample 1

The Northern Rebellion 

Sample 2

The challenge of Puritanism 

How to Explain Sequencing and Connections in GCSE History

Sequencing 

  • A sequence in history refers to a set of events, issues or developments that followed each other in a particular order

    • For the example question, the creation of the Separatists came before the creation of a new treason law in 1593

  • A sequence of events could:

    • Happen over a short or long period of time 

    • Stretch over multiple events 

    • Have negative and positive impacts 

  • When explaining sequencing you need to be careful not to write a story 

    • You could write PEE paragraphs to help prevent you from doing this 

Connections  

  • A connection in history refers to the links between events or issues

    • For the example question, Edmund Grindal and John Whitgift are linked as they were both Archbishop of Canterbury

  • Connections allow historians to: 

    • Demonstrate their understanding of events, issues and development within a historical period 

    • Compare historical events 

    • Explain the causes and consequences of an event 

    • Explain the wider developments of a period 

  • Connections can be written at any point in your answer 

  • Planning your answer will make it easier to make connections 

An illustration showing Event One, Event Two and Event Three. Arrows labelled "Link" connects Event One to Event Two and  Event Two to Event Three.
An illustration of sequencing and connections by using dominos

How to Explain Cause & Consequence

  • Cause and consequence is a second-order concept

  • Causes and consequences are like falling dominos

    • The causes are what push the dominos over

      • For the example question, a cause of the challenge of Puritanism was the rejection Whitgift’s ideas about religion

    • The consequences are the other dominos that fall

      • For the example question. a consequence of the challenge of Puritanism was forcing the clergy to swear loyalty to Elizabeth’s bishops and the Elizabethan prayer book

  • Cause and consequence can be directly linked and can be used to help explain the relationship between events, issues or developments 

Hand labeled "Cause" pushes domino labeled "Event One," causing it to topple into "Event Two," and then "Event Three," all under the label "Consequences."
An illustration showing causes and consequences in history as a set of dominos

Cause 

  • A cause in history is usually something that resulted in an event or issue to happen

    • For example, a cause of the Spanish Armada was the execution of Mary Queen of Scots

  • There can be multiple causes of a single event

    • Some can be short-term and long-term 

  • A cause does not always have to be something which happened before the event or issue happened 

    • For example, Elizabeth's choice not to marry was due to her desire to maintain power and control over England, which she could not do if she married

Consequence 

  • A consequence in history is something which has happened in response to the cause 

  • Consequences can be

    • Different for different groups of people 

      • E.g. the consequences of the Poor Law were different for different people in England 

    • Short and long-term 

    • Both positive and negative 

  • When explaining cause and consequences you may want to use causation connectives such as:

    • Due to 

    • As a result

    • Consequently

  • For the British depth study, you may want to revise key events by organising them into cause and consequence, as it will help you to answer this question 

"Write an Account" Question Structure

  • Your answer should consist of: 

    • Specific and relevant knowledge 

    • A demonstration of the cause and consequence of the event or issue

    • An explanation of how the event or issue mentioned in the question impacted the wider development of the topic

  • Your answers could be written in PEE paragraphs: 

    • P- Make a point about the question

    • E- Include knowledge to support the point you have made

      • Focused on the group or development mentioned in the question 

      • Show knowledge to help demonstrate sequencing, connections, cause and/or consequence

    • E- Explain the question

      • Focus on the key demands of the questions 

      • Include a complex explanation showing your understanding of  sequencing, connections, cause and/or consequence

  • To achieve full marks, you need to repeat this twice

  • It is tempting in this question to write your answer like a story, do not do this 

    • The question is asking you to explain the sequence, connections, cause and/or consequence of the event, issue or development, not a story

Worked Example of a “Write an Account” Question

Worked Example

Write an account of how Elizabeth dealt with the challenge of Puritanism. 

[8 marks]

Answer:

Elizabeth dealt with the challenge of Puritanism by making arrests. Elizabeth arrested the Archbishop of Canterbury, Edmund Grindal, and replaced him with John Whitgift. Grindal was a threat to Elizabeth because he refused to close down prophesying meetings. Elizabeth wanted him to shut these down because people criticised the Elizabethan church at these meetings. Therefore, Elizabeth replaced him with Whitgift and forced the clergy to swear loyalty to Elizabeth’s bishops and the Elizabethan prayer book. This stopped Puritans from spreading their ideas through their pamphlets, which helped Elizabeth. Puritans criticised the Elizabethan Settlement because it allowed too many Catholic ideas like bishops to survive.

Another way Elizabeth dealt with the threat of Puritans was through violence. Some Puritans rejected Whitgift’s ideas and formed a new group called the Separatists, who wanted to be separate from the Anglican church. The government responded by passing a law in 1593 which allowed the Elizabethan government to execute anybody suspected of being a recusant or a separatist. Barrow and Greenwood were both hanged in 1593 for their writings. This forced all Separatists to accept the Middle Way or go to another country. This helped to end the challenge of Puritanism in Elizabethan England for the rest of her reign and reduced criticisms of Elizabeth.

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Natasha Smith

Author: Natasha Smith

After graduating with a degree in history, Natasha gained her PGCE at Keele University. With more than 10 years of teaching experience, Natasha taught history at both GCSE and A Level. Natasha's specialism is modern world history. As an educator, Natasha channels this passion into her work, aiming to instil in students the same love for history that has fuelled her own curiosity.