How to Write a Letter for GCSE (Edexcel GCSE English Language)

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Deb Orrock

Written by: Deb Orrock

Reviewed by: Nick Redgrove

The letter-writing task is the most common question given as one of the two writing tasks in Section B of Paper 2. If you are given a letter to write, the purpose will normally be to give your opinion or point of view about a topic.

The following guide to writing a letter in your Edexcel English Language GCSE exam includes:

  • Conventions of a formal letter

  • Structuring your letter

Conventions of a formal letter

A formal letter will usually be written to a figure of authority, such as a headteacher, a manager of a company or the editor of a newspaper. The purpose of your letter is normally to give your opinion or point of view, but it could also be to inform or advise. There are some typical conventions of a formal letter that you can use, but be careful not to spend too much time on irrelevant formatting details. Including a date, the correct salutation and sign-off are sufficient to demonstrate that you understand the correct form.

Formal letter

In a formal letter you should:

  • Include a date

  • Use the correct salutation:

    • If you do not know the name of the person you are writing to, then use “Dear Sir/Madam”

    • You can use “Dear Editor” if writing in response to an article or letter seen in a newspaper or magazine

  • Use the correct sign-off:

    • If you do not know the name of the person you are writing to, use “Yours faithfully,” at the end

  • If you are given the name of the person, then start with “Dear [name]” and end with “Yours sincerely,”

  • State in your introduction what you are writing about, why you are writing and what your opinion is:

    • Make this relevant to the purpose of the task

    • Instead of using “I am writing because…”, use the wording of the task instructions

    • For example: “I am writing to give my opinion about…”

  • Write clear and well sequenced paragraphs, using appropriate connectives

  • Use topic sentences to begin each paragraph, and then develop that point appropriately and in detail

  • Try not to include multiple, or contrasting, arguments in one paragraph:

    • Make one distinct argument per paragraph

In order to access the full range of marks, you should aim to write 3–4 detailed, well developed main paragraphs, in addition to a brief introduction and conclusion. This means, when you plan your writing, ensure you have four separate points or arguments you can make. You can use the bullet points in the question to help you with this.

A formal letter layout should look something like this:

Template for a formal letter with structure and annotations; includes introduction, arguments, conclusion, date, and signature under "Yours faithfully".
Paper 2 Section B letter layout

Examiner Tips and Tricks

Always write with your intended audience in mind. Address them directly throughout your writing, mention their specific concerns and ensure you develop your points in a way which would convince your specific reader.

Structuring your letter

Once you are sure of the form you should write in, and you have considered your audience and the tone you wish to adopt, you should plan the content of your response. It is up to you whether you choose to argue for or against the statement, as long as you plan your argument, develop it thoroughly and sustain it throughout your response. 

To plan a range of points which will support your point of view, you can:

  • Create a mind-map or write a brief list of points and techniques to use:

    • It can be helpful to number your ideas to structure your answer in a specific order

    • The examiner is not grading you on how much you know about the given topic, as it is impossible to predict what subject matter will be on the paper. You are marked on your ability to construct a convincing argument 

  • Your letter should be structured into 3–4 detailed, well developed main paragraphs:

    • Remember, each paragraph does not have to be the same length

    • Better answers vary the lengths of their paragraphs for effect

    • Develop separate ideas or points in each paragraph 

    • Avoid repeating the same idea throughout your letter

For example:

Introduction

  • Introduce why you are writing, what you are writing about and what your opinion is

  • Directly address your reader

  • Consider your use of pronouns, such as “you” or “we”, to involve your reader in your argument

Paragraph 1

  • Start your paragraph with a topic sentence

  • Offer a fact or some “research” to support your opinion:

    • This will add credibility to your argument

Paragraph 2

  • Use a connective and another topic sentence

  • Provide an anecdote to offer an example which proves your argument:

    • This builds rapport with your reader by engaging with them on a personal level

Paragraph 3

  • Use a contrasting connective and a topic sentence to offer a counter-argument (if appropriate):

    • You can use this to show that you understand your reader and have considered their concerns

Paragraph 4

  • Use a connective and a topic sentence to make your final point or argument

  • Offer more evidence to back up this argument:

    • For example, statistics, a “witness” statement or a quote from an “expert” all work well (you can make these up, but make sure they sound plausible)

Conclusion

  • End your letter with an emotive plea or solution to the issue:

    • Ending your letter on a single sentence, perhaps using a triplet, is effective

To produce an effective response, you should aim to develop your points carefully in each paragraph, using language features and techniques to highlight ideas and emphasise your points.

So remember, the basic features of a letter that the examiner would expect to see are:

  • Correct formatting:

    • The date

    • The correct salutation (greeting)

    • The correct sign-off

  • A clear introduction:

    • This needs to be engaging and direct

    • It should introduce why you are writing, what you are writing about and what your opinion is

  • A well structured argument:

    • Paragraphs begin with topic sentences and are effectively linked

    • Use a range of persuasive techniques to support your point of view

    • An objection to the argument is handled in a paragraph

  • An emotive and memorable conclusion

    • Sum up your arguments and remind your audience why your argument is valid

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Deb Orrock

Author: Deb Orrock

Expertise: English Content Creator

Deb is a graduate of Lancaster University and The University of Wolverhampton. After some time travelling and a successful career in the travel industry, she re-trained in education, specialising in literacy. She has over 16 years’ experience of working in education, teaching English Literature, English Language, Functional Skills English, ESOL and on Access to HE courses. She has also held curriculum and quality manager roles, and worked with organisations on embedding literacy and numeracy into vocational curriculums. She most recently managed a post-16 English curriculum as well as writing educational content and resources.

Nick Redgrove

Author: Nick Redgrove

Expertise: English Senior Content Creator

Nick is a graduate of the University of Cambridge and King’s College London. He started his career in journalism and publishing, working as an editor on a political magazine and a number of books, before training as an English teacher. After nearly 10 years working in London schools, where he held leadership positions in English departments and within a Sixth Form, he moved on to become an examiner and education consultant. With more than a decade of experience as a tutor, Nick specialises in English, but has also taught Politics, Classical Civilisation and Religious Studies.